Adults should not call teenagers lazy as it is not their fault. It is due to the melatonin kicking in late. Melatonin is a hormone that makes our body shut down. For adults it kicks in at ten but for teenagers it kicks in at one o’clock. We all know that teenagers need to sleep for at least eight hours so then that means they should be waking up at nine. This is why I think school should start later, so that teenagers have more time to rest and then focus more in school.

April 20, 2015 at 10:31 pm
Three more targets to help you achieve Perfect Paragraph:
1) Re-read and edit the length of your second sentence
2) How many times have you used the word ‘then’?
3) Vary your vocabulary